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BRR F1-1 by =jetpilot55:iconjetpilot55:

Categories Cartoons & Comics > Digital Media > Comics > Strips

©2008-2009 =jetpilot55
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BRR OC Battle Finals Round 1(hosted by :icongreenfrostfire:)

Part 1 of 15
:iconjetpilot55:'s John Cleese
vs
:icondiana-hnd:'s Setrina

Featuring
:iconah-hin:'s Taralisa
:iconmostacidic:'s Rexi
:iconteokeez:'s Mike
:iconyarshe:'s Chase
:iconspykeofkonoha:'s Spyke
:icontwistedviper:'s Zenas

-=Narrator=-
Pane 1-6: Retrieving the letter fragments from each Aspen Aspirin member
Pane 6: It's been a long time since I attempted to paint a sunset....this really could have come out better >,>

[link] << Watch and laugh. Then watch it about 10 more times and give yourself a hemorrhage. Plus you'll know where the title comes from

ARTIST'S NOTE: The first page of hopefully an entire comic done on the tablet. Still getting used to doing linearts with it, so it looks kinda rough and could end up taking me longer, in which case I'd switch back to pencils. This is likely going to be the only full color page as well, but we'll see. Comments/critique/suggestions are appreciated. Do you guys think this looks better or worse?

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=SpykeofKonoha Oct 9, 2008, 9:17:09 AM
Hmm... well jet, I've got to admit for a first attempt on doing comics in a tablet, you're doing a fairly good job. Try and work on smoothing those lines out and getting proportions down.

I noticed you have a nack for making my own character's feet smaller than the rest of him... that's actually the inverse of what is actually supposed to be. The hands and feet of mobians are supposed to be larger in proportion to the body as opposed to humans. Still, I give you props for getting as far as you did in the tournament; your style really does kick butt on paper... now perfect it in digital media! :w00t!:

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=jetpilot55 Oct 9, 2008, 9:54:57 AM
Thanks a lot for the comment ^^ I'm still ironing out the details with using a tablet, but I seem to be getting more used to it. Definitely got a lot to work on though. I never expected straight lines to be so hard to draw with a tablet compared to on paper xP I'll keep in mind the bit about Spyke's proportions too, in case I ever need to draw him again.

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=SpykeofKonoha Oct 9, 2008, 10:31:14 AM
You're in the league... chances are we'll meet again... though not with the same character matching.

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